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Re: I'll Come to Thee by Moonlight
Hey Julia, I have read only two paragraphs, but I must say that you write really well. Your language is so sophisticated and advanced. I could picture the moon and ...
Nov 4, 2008 -
Re: Hooked on Phonics: A NaNo Playlist for Among the Infidels
The cover art is amazing. These are so educational. I always learn about different music when you post these. You should have like your own little musical school thingy. ~Angel ...
Nov 2, 2008 -
Re: Figment
Wow this was great and I really hope you continue you this. I'm sorry if I'm not of much help but you do have an interesting idea. It was insane ...
Nov 1, 2008 -
Re: Hope, Love and a Nectarine
Hey Maki! I loved the title, by the way. You write really well, but your thoughts lack transition. This is okay when you're writing a prologue but here I was ...
Nov 1, 2008 -
Re: In the Eyes of the Deceiver [One]
Hello! Sorry I couldn't get to this earlier but I'm here now. I loved this! Your descriptions were as always, wonderful and the words you use just fit perfectly. I ...
Nov 1, 2008 -
Re: The Elephant Boy {fourteen}
Hey Ky, Congrats on finishing book one and thanks for the heads up. I liked this but this new character seems kinda brave to me. The way he talked to ...
Oct 31, 2008 -
Re: In the Eyes of the Deceiver [Preface]
Hey Ash, Well I liked this but then again I always love your Historical stories. You have great imagery and your MC is different from what you usually write but ...
Oct 26, 2008 -
Re: Because - Chap. 9
Thanks for the heads up KJ! This was a very sweet chapter and I falling in love with Vick more and more. I didn't see anything wrong, this was completely ...
Oct 23, 2008 -
Re: The Elephant Boy {thirteen}
One word. Wow. This was the best chapter yet. It was riveting and it was written beautifully. I saw no mistakes but of course you're going to have to wait ...
Oct 23, 2008 -
Re: Because - Chap. 8
Another great chapter KJ!! Thanks for telling me it was posted. I just watched Prom Night, and I think you mentioned that you got the inspiration from that movie for ...
Oct 22, 2008 -
Re: For all Eternity - Prologue
Hey Ash, I love love loved this story. Its the perfect one, especially since its almost Halloween. Your words and descriptions were lovely, but I think a new beginning sentence ...
Oct 20, 2008 -
Re: Halloween with Snoink, Grif, Edward Cullen, and Bulbasaur
This was epic and it deserves a gold star! I needed a good laugh and this one had me literally falling out of my chair. I LOVED THIS AND I ...
Oct 19, 2008 -
Re: The Art of Looking Down
Hey Ky, Just thought I'd comment on this since it no one else did. ^_^ I liked this and if you don't stop writing good stuff I'm never going to ...
Oct 18, 2008 -
Re: The Party Killers [novel]
Hey Suze, as I said before, that cover really made me want to read this. And I don't know if you've changed this or what but this was a delicious ...
Oct 18, 2008 -
Re: A painful first kiss
Hey there! I read this yesterday but I didn't get to comment. I loved this and its so unique and refreshing that I jumped for joy when I read this. ...
Oct 18, 2008
